A Question For Whomever Wishes To Answer

For those of you who are following along with the Fragments of Fiction story I was wondering if you had noticed any major holes in the fabric. Are there elements that you think do not make any sense?

I am writing this as I go along, which means that I have a general idea of where it is heading, but not a clear destination. That presents a couple of complications, but nothing I shouldn’t be able to overcome.

But since it is my story there may be areas that are clear to me that need further elucidation. The floor is open to anyone who wishes to remark upon it.

Thanks,

Jack